Step One: Reread the entire work to glean what you are actually trying to say.
Step Two: Make index cards for each scene to sort out structure.
Step Three: Know your characters thoroughly from Karen Reddick, The Red Pen Editor, author of Grammar Done Right
Step Four: Evaluate your structure.
Are there continued high points and challenges that accelerate every 2 pages forcing the main character to change?
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